I would be in awe of this poem even if you weren’t my beautiful niece. But the fact that you are, makes me love the words even more.
Keep on being authentic and sassy and I hope others go and check out your (new) blog and get as much out of your powerful words as I do.
Critics criticise that which they don’t understand.
That which is beyond them.
And that which makes them look inferior. X
the critics spoke,
and at first she listened.
and at first she defended,
and at first she questioned,
and at first she wondered why.
the one that was so quiet,
had so much to say,
behind the safety of another.
criticism to be passed from one,
to another,
to her.
but to her it was
a critic.
and she could no longer
see the line drawn
between
the constructive
and the afraid.
and when
she realised she had
only considered “i”
and not “they”
and not how what “they” said
reflected “them”
and not “her”
she picked up the pencil
and drew the line
and placed those whose
reflections
reflected “them”
and not “her”
on one side,
and those who could
accept
“her” challenge
on the other.
beside her.
because what
those on the other side
had said
had never really reflected
“her”
but “them”,
and she no longer
would…
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How old is your niece. This is lovely.
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I am glad you liked the beautiful words. She is a v talented and authentic young lady. And ladies never reveal their age. 😃
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Haha. Okay. I guess the age doesn’t matter. Lovely words have no age
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Agree! have a great weekend. 😃
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Fantastic! Clearly the talent river runs deep in your family. Please pass on a high five from me 🙂
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Thanks for the high five – it has been passed on from London to Sydney!! And a v kind comment indeed re the talent river. 😀
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Haha, would’ve been quicker to send it myself from Melbourne 😉
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Haha 😃
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Lovely poem Lexa!
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Thanks (on behalf of my niece over in Australia). I am so glad you liked it. I am just so happy that she has started blogging as she is so talented. If you have time, leaving the like on her blog – where it properly belongs – would no doubt make her v happy. 😀 It is: https://flynntheblog.wordpress.com
Have a great Saturday evening.
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So much truth here. I wish I’d understood it when I* was a little younger.
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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Me too re having this level of emotional intelligence!! Life (high school) would have been a whole lot easier if I had gotten this figured out a bit sooner! Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, it means a lot. X😃
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Lovely poem by your niece!
I’m a Queenslander heading south tomorrow to visit my mother – much thanks for visiting my blog and following.
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My pleasure, your site is great. Lucky thing living in Queensland. We are visiting your lovely state in Mrach. Can’t wait! 😃
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Beautiful!
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Hi there, I am so glad you like my niece’s poem. If you have time click through to her blog and give her a like – she deserves the praise not me 😃. Have a lovely evening and thanks so much for making the time to comment.
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